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There was a house on a long street a young girl called Emily lived there with her family. Emily had a big collection of her favorite toy barbie dolls. She had curly haired ones, straight haired ones and a ken doll. After a while Emily was starting to grow up. She was no longer interested in dolls and had a new interest for ipods.

She took all her dolls and stored them in the basement and replaced her dolls with her ipods. After years and years the dolls were getting angry with been cramped in a toy box. So Barbie made a brave decision to break free out of the toy box.

A couple of days no Barbie! Every doll in the toy box was getting worried. Jessie said " Someone should go and get her" " Not me" said Hannah " I will " said Ken " No way" said the other dolls " Its much to dangerous". Ken made a map and a plan and set off for his adventure.